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Our worlds are so far apart
But you already possess my heart
I am forever paralyzed by your gaze
With that dashing smile and those eyes a blaze

Have no more worries my fragile one
I know your heart; it must weigh a ton  
I may not be as beautiful, funny or as smart  
But I can promise you one thing: I will not break your heart.  

I am not a fake this is the real deal
Open up your eyes, do you feel what I feel?
I am weird, I am odd and sometimes I don’t fit in
But what if I said you were the reason behind my grin?

What if I told you I could make everything all right?
And I’d stay up with you until the end of night  
I’d hold you in my arms like no one before
I’d hold you so tight because its you who I adore.  

I’ll tend to your wounds, as I heal my own
And from now on, you’ll never be left alone
You’ll hang like a star in my sky of blue
Because my heart, it bleeds, bleeds for you

I am alive once again, revived from the dead
Grown out from these tears that I once shed
It’s because of you that I feel this way
You are my light in this world of gray

It’s time to hold on, to stay strong
Make right what was once wrong
Take my hand I won’t ever let go
It’s just you and I and our love aglow
©2008-2009 ~beatlesfreak
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Yeah I know it's like the crappiest poem I've ever written but I've had a shitty week. I'm still going to work on it I'm just sick of this poem not being done.

My computer got a nasty virus and...well everything is gone. Everything I've ever written is gone forever. How stupid am I to not save my stuff on discs? Grr now I have to restart from scratch, or maybe that's just what I need?


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It doesn't sound like a 'shitty week' poem. And I like it. It has more... Pure emotion when it's not all revised.

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And in the daylight we can hitchhike to Maine
I hope that someday I'll see without these frames
And in the daylight I don't pick up my phone
'Cause in the daylight anywhere feels like home
-Matt and Kim
i actually like it a lot. its not crappy.
but it gave me this pit in my stomach
because i wanted to be all those things,
but in the end, it was me who was fake.
very well done :hug:

and gah i know how to feel with the computer crashing. mine crashes all the time.
thats why i started saving my stuff to like five different places and printing em off.

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- Melanie

"Screw perfection. Just embrace the greatness [LIFE] as it is."
Thank you:)

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"My role in society, or any artist's or poet's role, is to try and express what we all feel. Not to tell people how to feel. Not as a preacher, not as a leader, but as a reflection of us all." - John Lennon
Yeah I write my poems down in this book but I had like scraps of ideas where they are just beginnings of a poem that weren't saved:(...

Hah I hope this doesn't offend you because I don't mean it offensively but when I wrote this at parts I had you in mind, or some of your poems anyway. And thank you I'm glad you like it :aww:

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"My role in society, or any artist's or poet's role, is to try and express what we all feel. Not to tell people how to feel. Not as a preacher, not as a leader, but as a reflection of us all." - John Lennon
This is not crappy AT ALL! Are you crazy?
This makes me think so much of my current relationship. It feels like something my boyfriend would write for me, if he was a great poet like yourself. =P
I love this so, so much. So much.
Have a few more bad weeks, if it produces poetry like this. Hell, can I have your bad weeks?! lol
Keep writing, okay?

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~Kristie

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You had to break me, so that I could make me.
Take a look at me now.
haha no i dont mind.
wait you seriously had me in mind when it came to it?
personally i think thats kinda cool haha :P

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- Melanie

"Screw perfection. Just embrace the greatness [LIFE] as it is."
Aw you're too kind:blushes: Your comment means a lot to me:heart:
And yes I am a little bit crazy:giggle:

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"My role in society, or any artist's or poet's role, is to try and express what we all feel. Not to tell people how to feel. Not as a preacher, not as a leader, but as a reflection of us all." - John Lennon
Yeah I did really, I can't remember which poem of yours that it was but my interpretation of it was "I may not be the most beautiful (or whatever) but I can love you more than anyone." So yeah that is what I had in mind when I wrote it:blushes:

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"My role in society, or any artist's or poet's role, is to try and express what we all feel. Not to tell people how to feel. Not as a preacher, not as a leader, but as a reflection of us all." - John Lennon
well i really like that line or your interpertion of it or whatever you wanna call it. ^.^

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- Melanie

"Screw perfection. Just embrace the greatness [LIFE] as it is."

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